7.18.2006

The Doctor's Climax

Nicah woke up. The last thing she knew was that she had been kidnapped and the car broken. Where am I? She heard a voice.

"Are you awake now?"
Who is he?
"Cmon Nicah. You can do it."
How does he know me?
Her eyes opened and she saw a boy. Roughly the same age. She knew who he was.
"Carlos?"
"Yeah. It's me. Here, drink this, this will cool you down." He showed her a bottle of coca-cola.
'Where are we?" Nicah asked as she drank.
"I believe we are somewhere where are kidnappers brought us."
She looked around the room. It was small, with one small door at the end.
The boy continued, "Frankly, I haven't the faintest idea where we are. We might be in a house, or a dungeon."
"You didn't see them bring you here?"
"Nope, they put me to sleep. Let me guess, while in the car, they stopped and you smelled a chemical gas that made you sleep."
"How many hours have we've been here?"
"Well... If my clock is still working, I'd say I was around here 12 hours. You came in here 5 hours ago."
"Had any luck trying to get out."
"Nope. The door won't budge. It is triple locked from the outside."
"Why did they kidnap you at first?"
"Well... it's something I do."
"What?"
'You may not believe me, but I research on medicine. I'm a doctor. Young as I look, I keep this a secret. Somehow, it leaked. The weird thing is, I've never told this before. Not even my parents."
"Wow. How are we gonna get out of here?"
"I thought about it. If they get captured, they may not tell the police and we will be stuck here...forever."
"No, we won't."
"How do you know?"
"I have faith in God and my friends." A view of the other 4 popped in her head.

Suddenly, amidst their talking, the door unbolted and they saw the old man's face again.
"Hehe," smiling evilly. "Here are two of your so-called friends. It won't be long till I capture the other 2. He shoved Yanna and Jem inside and quickly closed the door.

"Jasper and Joshua are still there." Nicah had hope.
Carlos took out something from his pocket. It was a water of some sort. "Here. I invented this Teoxin. It dissolves in water and takes away sleepiness. Unconsciousness can't be healed though. This is how I stay up late assignments and wake up early for classes." He chuckled. Then he went over to Yanna and Jem and made them drink the Teoxin.
"Give it 5 more minutes."


Jasper met Joshua at the floor.
Jasper breathily asked, "You found them?"
Joshua was losing consciousness then. "No... They're...floor...think..."
"What? I can't understand you."
Joshua's sight was blurring. They're there in that room. Need to... save...
Jasper put Joshua on his back and ran. Joshua was losing energy. He saw a door. At the front of the door was the old man. With a gun pointed straight at them.

Yanna woke up. She saw Jem on her side. *cough* "Joshua..."
She stood up. "Joshua's in trouble! He's somewhere..." She looked around. "You didn't get out yet?"
Nicah replied, "Sadly not."
Jem opened her eyes. Carlos was staring right at her. She stammered. "Are...are...are you Carlos?" Nicah was right. He was handsome.
Carlos said, "She's awake. Now what do we do?"
Yanna said, "You haven't seen how to go out yet?"
Nicah replied, "Aha. I forgot about your observation skills."
"The answer is there on the door. This place is so creepy. A man covered us with this chemical. Jasper fell down a floor. Joshua's hitting the wall again and again."
She found a board on the other side. She wedged it in the small gap between the hinge and the door. She pushed. Carlos, Nicah and Jem helped. The door budged.
"Where'd you learn that?" Carlos asked.
"Pirates of the Caribbean." She replied. And they ran to the door at the other side of the hallway.

The gun was pointed at Jasper. He couldn't move.
"Drop the boy. Let's settle this one on one."
Jasper didn't know what to do. He heard Joshua whisper. "Drop me..."
He did. And quickly he ran toward the old man. He kicked the gun out of his hand. The man was surprised. Jasper took a white belt from his pocket and tied it in his forehead. Surprisingly, the old man, took a black belt from his pocket.
Oh man. There is no way I could beat this. Then he heard someone's voice in the distance. "Yes you can... I believe in you..." This gave him strength. He felt the chinese spirit rushing around him.
"Woooooo-ya!" He cried.
"Haaaaa-yu!" His opponent cried.
And they fought. Jasper kicked high. His opponent punched his stomach. Jasper muffled. He noticed Joshua slowly reaching for the door. He had to give him more time.

Joshua heard banging on the door. He crawled to it, a nail scraped him in his arm. Blood was oozing out.
"Arrrgh!" He cried. He crawled to the door and rested his back on the door. Vibrations. He heard Jem shout. Slowly, he pulled his hand up. He and Jasper were losing. He couldn't reach the handle. His eyes were dimming.

Jasper defended on every move. He didn't have the strength to fight a black belt. He got kicked to the floor. The opponent's foot was on his chin. He was losing. But he nevertheless never gave up.

Joshua reached for the handle. He forced hiself up, grabbed the handle, and turned the knob. The others pushed the door and they came out. Yanna came to him with Carlos. Joshua opposed her. "Save Jasper." Then he felt his heart beating, loudly. "Carlos!" He heard a thump on the ground. And that thump simultaneously sent him to a darkness called night.

Jasper couldn't move. Evrything ached. He looked to the door. Joshua couldn't open it. No. Jasper looked up, trying to bear the pain the black belt gave him. Then he heard a voice. "Jasper!!!" He looked at a girl. He knew who she was though he couldn't remember. Everything turned white. "Aaah!" He couldn't move. "Here! Save him!" He felt his heart beat. It pained him. He closed his eyes.

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